Friday, 30 September 2016

Thrilling discovery by Dillan

Thrilling Discovery  

My school was going to Dublin zoo to see all the animals. On the way our bus had to stop. A famer told our bus driver quietly. When we got to the zoo we saw a pink giraffe, black pig, grey elephant, brown squirrel and a white falcon but our teacher didn’t look. On the way back we say a man drilling a hole in the ground to get water for the animals. When we got back to the bus we ate our sweets and we talked about what we did at the zoo until we got home 

The Crow by Alan

One day John suggested that we get a class pet to Ms.Kelly. Ms.Kelly said it was a great idea and John should pick.
John chose a three eyed crow with sixty two feet and a long beak. The crow began drilling a hole in Ms. Kellys shoe quietly while she was teaching about a mysterious pink giraffe. 

Ms.Kelly began to scream loudly. The crow flew up to her shoulder and began to take bites from her head chomp chomp chomp chomp is all you heard as the crow removed Ms. Kellys left ear. Then the hairy left nostril gross right!?!?

Caw Caw by John

One day I was in school doing work, and then quietly ms Kelly turned on the news and on the news there was a mutant bird with a drill beak! it could sense fear and it was coming for ms Kelly.... Caaaaw, caw caw then we could hear some thing in the distance in was the mutant bird.

When it got there Ms Kelly nearly had a panic attack so she quickly ran behind the door to hide from the bird ,the bird slowly creeped into the class room with its pink drill nose and jumped up and drilled a hole through ms Kelly's head!

The day I went to the zoo

 One day Alana and I went to Dublin Zoo! We met Katie and Emma! We saw the Tigers and lions it was so cool! Something happened. Alana got pushed in Katie  replied "OH NO!!!!" We quietly snuck in to the Tigers. But!! Alana was chased, I pulled the Tigers tail. Then I was chased but I was too fast .I laughed when we finally got out of the cage.  
We got in trouble with the manager. we were so embarrassed I hated it ugh!! .But we went home and had a sleepover .we laughed all night long .we made jokes about the Tigers.And we had dance offs And our own fashion show. Then mum came in and mumbled "guys get to bed". The next day my friends went home 
The End!

A Trip To The Zoo by Alanna


One day my school and I were going on a school tour to the zoo! My teacher happened to hire a pink bus for us!

As we were walking through the zoo I saw a giraffe drilling a hole in a tree "this is a world of wonders" I said to myself!

We walked very quietly past the monkey cage because they were easily scared! but of course one of the students in our class had to start screaming at them , the whole school ended up in getting kicked out of the zoo ! our school ended up in getting kicked out of the Zoo!!!




The Pink Giraffe by Katie




My teacher brought my class to the zoo.  We quietly went to the giraffes.  There was a special giraffe, it was called the pink giraffe.  

A man was building an enclosure for the giraffes, we asked him what he was doing? He told us he was drilling a water hole for the giraffes.  

Later we had a picnic lunch, everyone was talking about the pink giraffe.  The next day in school we all had to write a story about our trip to the zoo and the pink giraffe.

 Near the end of the day the whole class got to read out their stories.

The Pink Giraffe by Katie




My teacher brought my class to the zoo.  We quietly went to the giraffes.  There was a special giraffe, it was called the pink giraffe.  

A man was building an enclosure for the giraffes, we asked him what he was doing? He told us he was drilling a water hole for the giraffes.  

Later we had a picnic lunch, everyone was talking about the pink giraffe.  The next day in school we all had to write a story about our trip to the zoo and the pink giraffe.

 Near the end of the day the whole class got to read out their stories.

Thursday, 29 September 2016

The pink giraffe

This story begins with a giraffe. A pink giraffe that HATED my teacher! The giraffe ( who's name  is Maria) was always trying to murder my teacher! She tried drilling nails into my teachers head, she tried quietly stabbing her with an orange pocket knife and she tried boring her to death with an EXTREMELY boring report on Egyptians. The thing is my teacher just will not be beaten! That giraffe really hates our hateful wildlife teacher!!! (Our teacher REALLY hates giraffes!)

Friday, 23 September 2016

The war of Ages by John (100wc week 3)

Once upon a time there was a furious blood thirsty battle ,there was flames everywhere, lots of dead men but one day King  scorpion had a devious plan. The other emperor, named scales, was planning something to blow up King scorpions fort to the ground. When they were in the next battle all of their warriors where down.

Then the next day the two of them went to fight ,it was a battle of skill and lasted for hours but after they both fainted. Now they knew that it was a loosing battle for both sides... So, later on they decided to join forces and they did.

So after they joined forces they decided to never go at war again and that is how the great battle ended.

The battle started in war... And ended in peace..