Friday, 30 September 2016

A Trip To The Zoo by Alanna


One day my school and I were going on a school tour to the zoo! My teacher happened to hire a pink bus for us!

As we were walking through the zoo I saw a giraffe drilling a hole in a tree "this is a world of wonders" I said to myself!

We walked very quietly past the monkey cage because they were easily scared! but of course one of the students in our class had to start screaming at them , the whole school ended up in getting kicked out of the zoo ! our school ended up in getting kicked out of the Zoo!!!




4 comments:

  1. Nice story Alanna but u said some thing twice

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  2. Well done Alanna,
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I'm wondering was the pink bus a bad omen? Did everything go down hill after that?
    What a pity that the whole school was kicked out of the zoo!
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork

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