Friday, 30 September 2016

Thrilling discovery by Dillan

Thrilling Discovery  

My school was going to Dublin zoo to see all the animals. On the way our bus had to stop. A famer told our bus driver quietly. When we got to the zoo we saw a pink giraffe, black pig, grey elephant, brown squirrel and a white falcon but our teacher didn’t look. On the way back we say a man drilling a hole in the ground to get water for the animals. When we got back to the bus we ate our sweets and we talked about what we did at the zoo until we got home 

2 comments:

  1. Well done Dillan & welcome to the 100wc.
    I'm glad you enjoyed your day at the zoo.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork

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  2. Well done Dillan, great writing.
    Your day at the zoo sounds colourful!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin

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